
- "I want to meet her as soon as we're done here."
- When last we saw Hope and Ellen
"Elliot turned into Cheerleadra and flew away."
"Not again."
"He does that a lot?"
"At this point, I think he just likes flying around."
Under my previous comic planning approach (in which I wrote page by page instead of writing everything out and THEN figuring out pages), I'm pretty sure this page would have found a way to end on Ellen's question. This most likely would have been done by making Diane and Rhoda talk more before seeing Hope.
Granted, I'm not a hundred percent certain of that, but it feels like something past me would do. In any case, I like this more.